17A- Elevator Pitch 2


https://youtu.be/aGK6J-fGU_0


In response to my feedback, what was important was how I was to present my idea. It would need to be presented to a medical company who is very much set in their ways and doesn't like change. Also, maybe using a model of my cast in the video could help clarify what I meant. Also, do not use my name in the intro. I did not really get any feedback that was useless or silly.

Based on the feedback, I cut saying my name and then talked about the financial aspect as well as how it will be implemented by doctors in the future.

Comments

  1. Aviana EntrepreneurshipJuly 6, 2019 at 4:17 PM

    Hello John,

    You did a good job with this elevator pitch. I like how you explained that the cast will be fitted for the individual consumer. The benefits you presented for your cast are very good and can persuade the consumer even more, especially after you compared it to the traditional cast and talked about cons of the older cast. Also, you presented a whole process for the big question regarding how the doctors will want to implement it. Furthermore, the price range for you cast was reasonable. Good job again!

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  2. cpatton10July 8, 2019 at 5:40 PM

    Hi Jack the new elevator pitch was great went and watched your old one and you made some great improvements. I liked how you included the price range for your cast and how it would be affordable for most people. I think that your voice sounded good and the message was very clear and organized. Keep up the good work. Look forward to seeing more of your videos and post. Great job again.

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  3. Ana RebolledoJuly 8, 2019 at 7:55 PM

    Great introduction! I love how you point out the problems with the previous design and address them with the new one. This contrast makes for a much more compelling argument for your project. Taking into account the prices helps give good perspective on the cast; plus it seems that the benefits of avoiding other potential health hazards could offset the price differences.

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